In response to Shamera's weekly challenge...

Aug 29, 2005 11:39


Took me forever, but I finally convinced myself to write something.

Judgement Day
by Saturnine
approx 1,001 words...and yes, it has an end!

Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold. )

original fiction, challenge 1

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tsukishirou August 31 2005, 01:41:33 UTC
Shocking and somewhat scary. o__o

What happened to the poor narrator? He sounds so deluded and out of it... ^^;; The end of the world coupled with the death of his wife? Is that why he's so off?

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the_spy August 31 2005, 03:55:39 UTC
Erm... this narrator is tricky. His view of events is distorted. Here's a telling clue: "Forgive me, it is in my nature to exaggerate the severity of my situation."

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