Hidden Alliance Part 10

Jan 23, 2010 14:14

Hidden Alliance.

Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin

Author: pawshingo

Genre: angst, mob

Rating: G/PG13

Disclaimer: I don’t own them….

Part 10

Summary: Still in his early 20’s, Park Yoochun is the newly chosen head of the Park family. The Park family is part of an alliance which consists of a few other families, the Kims, Cho, Na and the Shims. As head of a ( Read more... )

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gompi January 23 2010, 06:28:24 UTC
awwww i love this chapter!

BUT KYUHYUN WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!! /cries

man is everyone in this story?

Shiwon, Sunny, NICOLE?! XDDD

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pawshingo January 23 2010, 06:37:21 UTC
XDDDD! Yup! Everyone! Makes it easier to visualize as I write. I had to kill someone... heheh! I thought of changing it but I didn't know where else to insert Kyu!

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gompi January 23 2010, 06:41:15 UTC
you could've made Kyu switch teams!

he's so cool!

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pawshingo January 23 2010, 08:11:06 UTC
Ok, he's still alive in first-born though... I won't kill him in my next fic. LOL!

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chloe1910 January 23 2010, 09:46:15 UTC
hehe..I love a clingy Yoochun. I am glad that they are making their relationship more known...

Ryeowook is such a bastard....dunno why people are still loyal to him...I'm worried for the Yoomin...

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pawshingo January 23 2010, 10:02:40 UTC
Clingy Yoochun is the best, I try to make him as clingy as possible!!! They are loyal because they are scared or have their own agenda!
Yoochun: Thank you for worrying about us but, we'll be okay.

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sinkingstone79 January 23 2010, 09:48:45 UTC
Ryeowook cuttie is very bad here!
Kang Ho Dong's daughter wedding? I love to see the funny ho Dong. Or is he serious and powerful in it?

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pawshingo January 23 2010, 10:05:56 UTC
I wanted Ryeowook to be mean, no cuteness at all. Ho Dong? Maybe a little of both.

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izanamiwiles January 23 2010, 20:12:07 UTC
WOW! never saw that coming.....Kyu's death really came as a shock, but more like a movie type of shock. I guess I was too caught in the story ^^
thanx a lot for updating, and for not hurting Changmin right away...
I love their relationship, they really compliment each other it's cute, and even Changmin can't resist Yoochun, and I just love how Yoochun knows that and takes advantage of it ^^
again thank you for writing this, and please update soon =^^=
...since I've already sent Yoochun (who I hope is doing good *w*) I'll send u *cookies and cupcakes* this time!
*big hug*
=^^=

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pawshingo January 24 2010, 15:04:55 UTC
I didn't plan Kyu's death, it just came to me as I was writing this. You're welcome and sorry but Minnie gonna get a bit hurt. Whoever can say no to our Chunnie. And yes, Yoochun and I are doing well *grins slyly* Thanks 4 the cookies, cupcakes and hug! *hugs u back*

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Re: оченавь даже pawshingo February 21 2010, 16:20:50 UTC
I'm sorry but I can't read your comment.

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