The firstborn of our firstborn Part 14

Apr 08, 2010 23:53

Title: The first-born of our first-born.

Author: pawshingo

Pairings: Yoochun/Changmin

Rating: G

Genre: AU

Disclaimer: I don’t own DBSK, SJ though it would be nice if I did….

Summary: Best friends, Park Hyo Bin and Shim Jiwon made a promise to each other before retiring from the army. Park Hyo Bin’s first-born of his first-born, his first child’s ( Read more... )

first- born, yoochun/changmin

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pawshingo April 9 2010, 13:59:24 UTC
Thanks bb, will update soon *whispers back*

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chloe1910 April 8 2010, 18:06:04 UTC
hehe....keep it up Yoochun, Changmin deserves to be taught a lesson,t hat smug and insensitive jerk ^^

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pawshingo April 9 2010, 14:03:11 UTC
Yes he does, the biggest ever jerk! Hehehe!

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peach_gerl16 April 8 2010, 18:25:41 UTC
yay~~~update!
good job,chunnie..minnie is bother by his action..
can't wait for minnie's reaction on the mv..
update soon ^_^

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pawshingo April 9 2010, 14:20:00 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! Will do!

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ephemeral_blue April 8 2010, 18:53:22 UTC
I've been waiting so long for an update (:

Yay!! Changmin is finally not being a jerk and taking notice of Yoochun. So excited, that insolent Changmin, I've wanted to smack his face for being so mean. It's about time he start feeling the cold shoulder of being disregard!

Yoochun fighting! Pumping his fist in the air, Yoochun started walking.
So adorable!!!

Can't wait for more XDD

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pawshingo April 9 2010, 14:23:13 UTC
About time he had a taste of his own medicine, huh? Hehehe! Minnie will come to his senses soon! Thanks for reading and *gushes* I love your fics!!!!

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izanamiwiles April 8 2010, 19:51:22 UTC
hey update \o/ yayay!
First and foremost: I'm so sorry because I just realised I've never actually commented on this fic....even though I've been reading it *shame on me* so million apologies, and promise it won't happen again! *bows in apologies again*
second: yess Changmin is finally getting it! *hehe* nice played Yoochun! Just don't give up right away ok?! Changmin does need to learn his lesson! XDD
*random* but I'm currently watching ""full house" and Changmin muttering to himself just made me think of Rain muttering to himself not getting the fact that their hearts are falling for the person right in front of them. ^^
So thanx a lot for this ^^;
can't wait to read mooooooooooooooooooooore!
*big hug*

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pawshingo April 9 2010, 14:29:59 UTC
Bb!!! Thanks so much for the comment and the icon! It really got the ideas flowing!!! Hehehe! So, it's okay. Your icon more than made up for you being a silent reader on this fic, LOL! Seriously, it's fine. Just comment whenever you want to. I'm glad and happy to get just one comment. Chunnie will NEVER give up! Never say die!*hugs you back*

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