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Cock Tease

Aug 24, 2010 23:59

Title: Cock Tease (Cause I'm soooo imaginative)
Pairing: Dean/Sam (mentions of John/Dean)
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 1605
Warnings: Underage (Sammy at 11-13 and Dean at 14-17), wincest, dirty talk (my first try, be gentle), and orgasm denial
Disclaimer: If I owned them I really wouldn't be writing porn, now would I?

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underage, dean/sam, orgasm denial, wincest, dirty talk

Comments 16

littleslasher09 September 1 2010, 07:51:05 UTC

Nice! Very hot! I'm a little tempted to ask for a sequel of some sort. Pretty please with special Sammy dimples on top!
Thanks for sharing.

payperv_iew September 1 2010, 22:46:56 UTC

Lol, thanks so much! It's really only my second attempt at writing pron so it means a lot.

And as for a sequel... I dunno. If you can give/find me a prompt that inspires me, I'd definitely consider it. :P

littleslasher09 September 2 2010, 06:07:58 UTC

Second time?! Jeez! My early stuff was so shit! I cringe when I see it. :P But this is really really good! I'll try and find a prompt :)

littleslasher09 September 2 2010, 06:09:13 UTC

Second time?! Jeez! My early stuff was so shit! I cringe when I see it. :P But this is really really good! I'll try and find a prompt :)

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payperv_iew September 14 2010, 00:58:25 UTC

Thank you. I'm actually going through prompts right now. Altho I'm pretty much dead from flu right now so it could be a while. :P

imaginethehappy September 28 2010, 04:14:42 UTC

dayum. that probably shouldn't me so hot but *guh*

payperv_iew September 28 2010, 04:20:42 UTC

Thank you! And ps, your icon = love.

john_n_dean October 2 2010, 18:40:15 UTC

Dude... this is fucking hot! I don't usually like Dean/Sam, but when I do it's like this... I'd love to see Daddy playing too...

payperv_iew October 2 2010, 19:15:13 UTC

I LOVE your John/Sam stuff so thank you so much! I'm still trying to finish another prompt. But maybe in the future I'll come back to this. I just have no starting place for a sequel in my mind.

john_n_dean October 2 2010, 19:38:31 UTC

You're welcome! And, dude, if you need help figuring out a sequel just let me know... your story has me thinking of all sorts of dirty scenarios.

payperv_iew October 2 2010, 19:45:57 UTC

Prompt away

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betahimetsukiko September 14 2011, 13:22:41 UTC

Awesome! Maybe Dean secretly has a panty/stocking fetish, which can be supported by s5 The End, and wants really bad to do Sammy while little brother's wearing a black garter w/matching silk panties. He ends up jerking off to it forever but doesn't tell anybody, so it comess as a shock to him when Sam decides to take 'matters' into his own hands. >3< He goes for Dean's journal and skin mags to see what Dean's been wacking off to. Maybe a little of this?