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paytofay

Kink Meme fics

May 22, 2010 14:37

De-Anoning on these two suckers :o!

First Sight: Chekov and Sulu meet in a virtual reality environment 2,600 words for this prompt :D
( the stars came out and filled up the sky )

star trek, chekov/sulu, fic

Comments 9

cruelnovember May 22 2010, 18:59:13 UTC

Ooh, that second one was you! It's been haunting me for the past few days, the use of language in it is so beautiful and makes me want to read Lolita. :)

paytofay May 22 2010, 19:07:58 UTC

Ohh thank you! and yes yes yes read it; I was really only being a copy-cat here and trying to emulate Nabakov's style, which is haunting and depraved and magical and Lolita is definitely one of my favorite books of all time, if not my favorite. It's just so good and I shiver every time I so much as look at it. If you like, here's a poem which is one of the chapters, and is a work of art in itself... haha thank you so much for reading, and tolerating this little spazzy tangent of mine ;)

yakbites May 22 2010, 20:34:45 UTC

Simultaneously creeped out and moved.

Much like I feel when I read Nabokov.

To which I conclude: Awesome.

paytofay May 22 2010, 20:59:22 UTC

thanks bro;D the dry-heave is a particularly distinctive hallmark of Nabakov's work, y/y??

aidara May 24 2010, 01:51:53 UTC

That first one is such a brilliant use of one of my absolute favorite kinks, the whole falling in love anonymously thing. SO CUTE, and just very nicely written. <3

The second one is beautiful and haunting, definitely doing justice to Lolita. Very nice!

paytofay May 24 2010, 02:16:53 UTC

Aww thanks, I prompted something likewise a long time ago and I just love the idea too, so I had to fill it!! Aww, that they would be so attracted to each others' personalities ;____;

Thank you!! I tried to stop myself, lol. Well. No I didn't. Thank you so much for commenting:)))

little_tristan May 24 2010, 13:49:48 UTC

I admit I like the first one better, the consentuality and all, but awesome imitation of Nabakov there. That is not easy and you did it very well.:)

paytofay May 25 2010, 04:49:41 UTC

hahah yes, adults in written adult situations always helps;) Thanks so much:))) I really was trying to rip him off, lolol

used_bromance August 24 2011, 05:27:21 UTC

Oh snap! I realize I read the second fic two months ago. Your fantastic prose made me want to reread Lolita. You matched Vlad's style so well, I was just hungry for more. Great work there!

I read the first one tonight, and loved it nearly as much. Gosh, can those two be more perfect for each other?