"Promise Me" for jeyhawk

[almostforgiven]

Title: Promise Me
Rating: NC-17
Character/Pairing: Michael/Lincoln
Requested By: jeyhawk
Summary: Michael had always hated storms; they were loud, they were bright and they reminded him of the night Lincoln drove their mom to the hospital.
Author's Note: This is short, and to the porn. Just the way I think jeyhawk will like it.

Comments

[jeyhawk]

Oooooh. :0) I love it!!!!!!!!!

There's porn and there's porn and you know porn. I love Michael being afraid of thunderstorms and Lincoln being all protective and sweet.

I know I suck at commenting, but I really really like it. :0) Thanks for writing it.

♥

[jeyhawk]

Thank you! I was worried that there'd be too much porn and not enough substance for you liking but then again, you did request some sweet, sweet brother-cest.

And if you suck at commenting then I suck at replying to them, but thank you for loving it--I loved the prompt! I was so happy when I got it!

<3s

[certainthings]

:stupidgrin:

I flippin' love me some Michael and Lincoln.

Michael tugged at the blankets, sneaking in to push his body against his brother's.

Love that line the bestest. I love them sleeping together - even without sex.

[coppala]

Nice work. I love the combo of sweetness and porn. And the last line is killer.

[coppala]

Thank you, I had a lot of angst over the ending, as my beta can attest to.

I'm happy with the result though, it actually ended up changing the title -and- it made a lot of religous symbolism that was originally included toned down. But it does up the foreshadowing, no?

[coppala]

But it does up the foreshadowing, no?

That's what I love, because when you KNOW how it all ends up, that line is like a little punch in the gut.

[thelana]

He kissed his brother's lips again, savoring the salty taste from the tears.

Oh, that's kind of kinky ;D (not that that is bad thing)

Guh, I really like the strange seduction scene, with Lincoln comparing Michael's reaction to the one of a girl and him feeling bad for having such a crappy come on line and Michael still reacting to it like whoa!

And I find it oddly sweet that Lincoln turns down Michael's "make it up to you" offer. And that all this made Michael totally miss the end of the storm. Looks like he found a way to occupy and trick that hyperactive mind of his ;D

[thelana]

Guh, I really like the strange seduction scene, with Lincoln comparing Michael's reaction to the one of a girl and him feeling bad for having such a crappy come on line and Michael still reacting to it like whoa!

I'm glad it worked, because I think one of the hard things of Michael/Lincoln as a 'ship is that Lincoln's oh-so-very macho, and womanizing. It's always tricky to strike the balance between 'God, Michael, let me take you now' and 'ewww, boy cooties'. XD

Aren't they cute when they love eachother?

[goodbyemyfancy]

Comforting Linc and scared Michael and a pull out couch! *squeals* Very sexy, and I loved the porn :) Very sweet and still naughty ;)