Drabble: Not Enough (also, Touch)

Jul 30, 2010 18:32

She places two fingers against my neck, and I knew she can feel my pulse rise beneath her touch. It is all I can do to force myself to focus on her words, instead of losing myself in that single square inch of cold skin pressed against me. I can feel her vitae running hot with anger, greed, lust, loss, and predation. In this moment I know the ( Read more... )

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angelsamael July 31 2010, 01:19:39 UTC
Awesome! I/She guessed right.

I spent most of the rest of my spare time at work today, after that volley trying to hit the right voice on her side of it. Now clearly, I have no excuse not to find it and write it.

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pcharacter July 31 2010, 13:43:39 UTC
No....no excuses at all! It's been too long since there's been an Ashley post :D

As for whether she guessed right or not, depends on what she was trying to do...you may've just broken your ghoul even more ;) In the good way....

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diary_invidia July 31 2010, 03:40:15 UTC
I know I need to stop giggling, but I can't help it. I'm assuming the clusterfuck is the -same- clusterfuck. And this post was really nice. I'm really intrigued by the drabbling because it's just enough to get a glimpse, but it also is a bit more like art in that you have to pick through it a bit. Everything's not so "out there". Very nice!

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pcharacter July 31 2010, 13:45:07 UTC
Thank you so much! Yes, it's nice when things aren't so out there. I'm trying to be a little more opaque in my writing.

And yeah...it's the same clusterfuck. Lexie knew it would come back to bite her in the ass one day.

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kate_crassus August 3 2010, 16:10:31 UTC
Damn. Well, well written. I am totally bloody clueless and it's sure as hell drawn me in! Keep it up, hun!

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