Comments | pcharacter: You have let your doom in by the front door, but it will not depart that way.

pcharacter

You have let your doom in by the front door, but it will not depart that way.

Jun 11, 2011 08:30

I would like a kiss. Not some sister kissing your cheek, not some teen back of the limo prom one either... just a nice passionate kiss.I watch him as he names the last item on his list of demands. He is tense, it's written openly in his body language. The way he stands ready to bolt should I explode at him in a harpy's rage betrays both his youth ( Read more... )

petra

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codex_umbris June 12 2011, 00:44:30 UTC

Absolutly lovely.

angelsamael June 12 2011, 01:09:04 UTC

You know I misread the comment as Absolutely Lonely at first. Then re-read it and they are both apt.

There's a certain cold emptiness in this one that contrasts well with the otherwise physical nature of it.

pcharacter June 12 2011, 05:18:48 UTC

Thank you! I was striving to capture the discconect between the sensuality of it and the asexuality of it, so I am glad that came through.

It will be fascinating to see where this goes. I'm glad to have found Petra's voice again.

You will want to read.... pcharacter June 12 2011, 21:58:39 UTC

To read the other side, go here, and be sure to read the comments: http://aqathesetite.livejournal.com/6466.html