Prompt 5: Metaphor

[pe_gret]

Title: Metaphor
Author: pe_gret
Pairing: Kai x Uruha;
Bands Included:The GazettE
Chapter: One-shot; 5 Situation/100 Situations
Genre: Romance; Angst
Rating: PG
Synopsis: “What may look like a lake to you may look like my drawing to me. And to another person, the lake could be paradise.”
Warnings: Fluff Overload; Slight Mental Disorder
Disclaimer: I don’t own the

Comments

[golden_kimono]

This is really cute. ♥ And very different. I could see Uruha's brain working this way...

[pe_gret]

Thank you very much! *nods* I see him like that all the time for some strange reason.

[sakuraminisuka]

It took me so damn long to read this and I kept the tab open since the moment I spotted it.
It was so beautiful to read, I love Uruha's way of thinking in here. It's special. I like it a lot. You did another great job at writing a wonderful thing.
I hope to be as good one day ^^

[pe_gret]

Thank you so much! :) Haha, it took me damn long to write it. I like...had this idea but I was grounded so I had to find the perfect time to do it, when my mom was out. It took a while, but I got it! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hmm~ Being good...takes a while, actually. I still don't consider myself good enough.

Some tips:
1) Read a lot. Usually if you see other people's points of views, it can help you express your own.
2) Try to keep everything grammatically correct. You know, the usual. Put your quotation marks where they go and use write punctuation.
3) 3rd person writing can help you improve on 1st person writing so start with that.

It's not much, but it helped me. I've also been writing for 4 years, haha. xD So I guess it makes sense that I improved, lol

[sakuraminisuka]

Sometimes it can indeed take a while to write something, ne, even though you might have a good idea of what you want to write in the first place. I've encountered that quite a few times actually.
And yes, I read a lot, keep my grammar correct as much as I can and I've been writing in 3rd person for about 7 years so I guess first person sometimes is alright.
I just don't feel very confident about my writing, though I've had a few comments on it already. People on dA just prefere to 'favourite' it instead of commenting. And on here, well there is no checking on how many people read it, and not many comment either so it's a bit hard to know if I'm any good.

[pe_gret]

I don't personally do this, but many people do so you should try it. Just google a hit-counter. It will ask for the url and give you a code. Paste it at the bottom of your fanfiction. It will tell you how many people have visited your page. :)