Eden (chapter 3)

[pe_gret]

Title: Eden
Author: pe_gret
Pairing:Tora/Saga
Chapter: 3/???
Genre: AU; Angst; Romance
Rating: PG-13
Synopsis: ”Can you imagine not having to wear a mask, being able to look in the mirror?”
Warnings: None;
Disclaimer: The story is mine; The characters are yet to be tamed.

Comments

[k435y]

“You can’t possibly go home, you are my minion now!” Tora crossed his arms. lol. i find it funny every time he calls saga his minion. makes him sound crazier than the dictator who has yet to appear... XD ah~ if tora took over the world... o_o

It didn’t take long to realize that his mask had been taken from his face. maybe this is the real reason why tora wants to keep him by his side & won't let him go home. 8D

“Paint anything you remember on the walls of your room. Don’t ask why, just do it.” can i live with tora too? XD

hehehe somehow i just knew the color tora gave saga would be purple...first. XD

“Maybe it tastes like grape.” Saga said thoughtfully, holding up a finger to his tongue, then making a disgusted face followed by a gagging sound. It didn’t taste like grape. o_O saga, you weirdo.

Every orange person was then covered in blood. aww... T_T *pats the saga* for some reason, tora's like an art teacher & saga's the student. fufufu...

Kohara was probably in his hot tub like he always was, massaged by machines and

[pe_gret]

lol, although shou is supposed to be the bad guy, he's so cute ! haha ^^
it's cool if you forget things, i don't mind! i forget too!
and i just updated, have fun!

[vampire_kiki]

oh god, this chapter ends with an evil plot twist! oh god! But who am I kidding? I love it! more please, pretty please! I love the idea of the story!^___^

[pe_gret]

Thanks. ^^ It's been updated. :)

[vampire_kiki]

I'm glad to hear that!

and I keep wondering what Tora's plan is!

[saga_92]

Girl, you always make me damn curious in every end of the chapter lol

your story is cool! I love it <3
Moarrr please :)

[pe_gret]

Thank you ~ <3
It's been updated!

[iscreamboo]

I think I'm a new commenter, hehe~

I really like this concept you have going on here. It's a classic utopia gone dystopia, but the ending of this chapter has me dying to know what Tora is up to. :P

[pe_gret]

Thanks for taking your time to comment. :)
An update has been posted!