Eden (chapter 5)

[pe_gret]

Title: Eden
Author: pe_gret
Pairing:Tora/Saga; Shou/Hiroto
Chapter: 5/???
Genre: AU; Angst; Romance
Rating: PG-13
Synopsis: ”Can you imagine not having to wear a mask, being able to look in the mirror?”
Warnings: None;
Disclaimer: The story is mine; The characters are yet to be tamed.

Comments

[yukinao20]

wah! Shou gonna marrying Hiroto soon! xD
aaaand! Tora and Saga, I think there'll be a big move between them >< lol
please update soon :D

[pe_gret]

Thanks for commenting ~

[luvthe_gazette]

Omfg!! We were all right!! It's Hiroto!!

Are they going to murder Shou?? D:

[pe_gret]

Yes, you were!

And... /hides under blankets/

/spoiler alert/

killing kohara so soon would end the fic, don't you think?

[luvthe_gazette]

Oh shit!! They're gonna kill him!!! Noo!!

[saga_92]

AAAAa!!!!
“Show me your face. Now.” XDDDD I love how their relationship turned out to be! XDD
getting intimate, I think XD Love them!

and Shou x hiroto just <33

Need moreee <3

[pe_gret]

Thank you ^^ More will come!

[iscreamboo]

LMAO. Shou is just so assertive and rather shallow, it's hilarious how he's the leader! You wouldn't really expect a dictator to arrange a wedding right off the bat considering most people consider them to be cold-blooded. I kind of take a liking to this Shou although I do worry for Hiroto.

And Saga is really so innocent. It's like he hasn't gone through any stage of mental development since five or so years of age. I suppose that would make sense since he's been deprived of thinking in such an environment. The poor guy's still figuring out right and wrong. I just hope he'll be okay and that Tora won't screw him over too bad.

[pe_gret]

Shou is such a derp. xD I wanted to make him a character that was still likeable because...well he's Shou! I can't hate Shou!

I like how you analyzed this. Good job! /claps/

Thanks for commenting. :)