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Mon Esprit est en Vol!
Nov 01, 2005 21:48
I wrote a poem today, and it WILL have a french version... but this is the english version, enjoy (
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whoseekswho
November 2 2005, 04:01:50 UTC
fucking awesome man
We will watch the sun,
moving across the rainbow sky,
The sun will take us to a higher plane,
It will show us the way
I'd replace the last line with "It will show us the high way" instead
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peace_frogs
November 2 2005, 12:33:47 UTC
That does sound better... I'll change it ;P
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queen_j
November 3 2005, 21:25:16 UTC
you are such an amazing poet :)
put them all in a book one day.
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We will watch the sun,
moving across the rainbow sky,
The sun will take us to a higher plane,
It will show us the way
I'd replace the last line with "It will show us the high way" instead
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put them all in a book one day.
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