i cringed at the "Liar" part... the inner turmoil of Kazuya... I want hayato to find out the truth soon!!!! [I am craving for more angst, not?] >.< This was awesome! My heart skipped a bit when I saw the update on my friend's page, and I was squealing excitedly! Thanx for the update!!! =D
The "LIAR" comments and the other guilty thoughts scared me, because I could imagine him thinking them. I like how you mixed those in while they were being intimate...it really matched well. It's crazy also how Haya was like Jin while performing in the talent show.
Will Kame tell Haya the truth? What will happen to them when that happens? Ahhh, so exciting! I look forward to reading the next chapter - keep up the great work!
wow... your comment... is so intense, i'm so happy... hahahaha you comment it on my point of view... thank you so much.
yeah, they're intimate, and kazu's blaming himself. it's like, now he's the one cheating. .... something like that.
i thought it might be weird... cuz i didn't put enough hints that they're... being intimate...
yes, haya performs it's like... JIN! that's why he bolted out of there, because all he saw was Jin... and... i hope i didn't fail on connecting Pinky and MJ's song. :P somewhat, it just clicks, and i found them just a tad bit similar... hehehehe....
will kame tell him the truth...? i dunno... unless you want me to spill you some of the beans... hehehehe which i'm not sure either... :P
thank you so much for reading~ hope to do my best on the next chappie
Ohh~ I thought the previous chap was Chap 11? Haha.. i was about to skip this chap thinking I read it before but then I stopped and clicked in, no harm right? hahaha.. and lucky~ its a new chap~ XD
And.... i kind of like this chap though I felt the pain in Kame too... T.T
i really hope... hayato will know the truth soon actually... and.... will still forgive Kame though.....
yeah, it's painful for kame, because... it's JIN that he saw, but when they had sex, he called haya... when before, he thought of jin, and jin...
sort of twisted... yet, unexplainable... (hope that makes sense) hahahaha
well... as of haya knowing everything... hope everything turns out well.... hehehehe unfortunately, i have nothing down yet for the next chapter... hahahahaha
thank you so much for reading~ hope to do my best on the next chappie
OMG!! that dream is trying to tell Haya about Jin I wonder when will Kazu tell Haya about Jin It will shock him big time, but hearing it from Kazu will be much better Truly, if only... Thanks a lot for this awesome update!! I loved and enjoyed each moment from it Haya got that dancing and voice from his dad ne~~
Can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon~~ *hugs & kisses*
yeah! he just missed the fact that, in the dream, he didn't pay attention that kazu n TTUN are ALOT younger!!! hahahaha and, he woke up before kazu said the name after he mouthed I LOVE YOU... *sigh* if only ne~
you think so? it'd be better if kame told haya himself?
yeah! haya got the talent from his dad... the apple didn't fall far off from the tree after all, ne~
hope to do my best on the next chappie~ thank you so much for reading
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does that mean you liked it?
:D
thank you for reading~
hope to do my best on the next chappie
*gives cupcakes*
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unfortunately, i have nothing what so ever for the next chappie yet...
:(
sowwie, reader-san!!!!
*hugs*
but, hope to do my best on the next chappie~
:D
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the inner turmoil of Kazuya...
I want hayato to find out the truth soon!!!!
[I am craving for more angst, not?]
>.<
This was awesome!
My heart skipped a bit when I saw the update on my friend's page, and I was squealing excitedly!
Thanx for the update!!!
=D
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and i love him so much, but... yeah...
:(
ehhh? you want him to know EVERYTHING soon???
hahahaha...
well, let's hope i can pull that off, ne?
hahahaha
angst, angst, and more angst....
:P
i'm glad you liked it!
>333
thank YOU for reading~
hope to do my best on the next chappie
*gives cupcakes*
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The "LIAR" comments and the other guilty thoughts scared me, because I could imagine him thinking them. I like how you mixed those in while they were being intimate...it really matched well. It's crazy also how Haya was like Jin while performing in the talent show.
Will Kame tell Haya the truth? What will happen to them when that happens? Ahhh, so exciting! I look forward to reading the next chapter - keep up the great work!
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wow... your comment... is so intense, i'm so happy...
hahahaha
you comment it on my point of view...
thank you so much.
yeah, they're intimate, and kazu's blaming himself.
it's like, now he's the one cheating.
.... something like that.
i thought it might be weird... cuz i didn't put enough hints that they're... being intimate...
yes, haya performs it's like... JIN!
that's why he bolted out of there, because all he saw was Jin...
and... i hope i didn't fail on connecting Pinky and MJ's song.
:P
somewhat, it just clicks, and i found them just a tad bit similar...
hehehehe....
will kame tell him the truth...? i dunno... unless you want me to spill you some of the beans... hehehehe which i'm not sure either...
:P
thank you so much for reading~
hope to do my best on the next chappie
*gives cupcakes*
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And.... i kind of like this chap though I felt the pain in Kame too... T.T
i really hope... hayato will know the truth soon actually... and.... will still forgive Kame though.....
Update again soon ne~ :)
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well, i'm glad you didn't skip!!!
:)
yeah, it's painful for kame, because... it's JIN that he saw, but when they had sex, he called haya... when before, he thought of jin, and jin...
sort of twisted... yet, unexplainable...
(hope that makes sense)
hahahaha
well... as of haya knowing everything... hope everything turns out well.... hehehehe
unfortunately, i have nothing down yet for the next chapter...
hahahahaha
thank you so much for reading~
hope to do my best on the next chappie
*gives cupcakes*
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that dream is trying to tell Haya about Jin
I wonder when will Kazu tell Haya about Jin
It will shock him big time, but hearing it from Kazu will be much better
Truly, if only...
Thanks a lot for this awesome update!!
I loved and enjoyed each moment from it
Haya got that dancing and voice from his dad ne~~
Can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon~~
*hugs & kisses*
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hahahaha
and, he woke up before kazu said the name after he mouthed I LOVE YOU...
*sigh*
if only ne~
you think so?
it'd be better if kame told haya himself?
yeah! haya got the talent from his dad...
the apple didn't fall far off from the tree after all, ne~
hope to do my best on the next chappie~
thank you so much for reading
*gives cupcakes*
*hugs & kisses* >333
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