Title: Kamenashi Hayato; my son... my lover
Pairings: Hayato&Kazuya, Jin&Kazu, Junda, and TaNaka maybe...?
Summary: The result of his affair............. because of an argument, and his carelessness, the bundle appeared in his life. Kazuya walked out on him, upset, and left him to take care of it on his own. Jin loves him too much, so went after him
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after reading...
i like the things that happen ... glad that everything is ok now ... where is the baby... well he is not a baby anymore..
i was confused about the last part... but not anymore .... i liked it...
*i stole all the cookies and run...*
.^_________^
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-special happines??? thank you so much!!!
i'm glad you like both.
=D
well, i have the chappie 7.
it's not long, but... when i re-read it, it sounds boring.
lol
*sumimasen, ne....
lol
hai hai!!! haya-chan is not a baby anymore~
gomen ne, to confuse u
lol
hahaha. hope u like the cookies
thank you for reading and commenting!!!!!
*gives cupcakes
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LOL
i really liked it... so deal with it...
sorry for being childish...
but take your time... and rest well to give great ideas for your fics... XD...
LOL *ganna steal all the cupcakes too*
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=P
no, seriously, chappie 6, is left when jin found kazu in the cold, right?
well, kame passed out.
and... after that, there's just nothing more, but the two of them talking too much
lol
so i felt like...
"NANDE!!!! it's borinnnnggg!!!!"
lol
so... sumimasen deshta...
*pouts*
(is cupcake good?) =D
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so intriguing!! 8DDD can't wait for next chap :D I really enjoy this story :DDD So great :D Thanks for this and please update soon :DDD
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u enjoyed it?
thank you so much!!!!!
=D
i will do my best to update the chappie 5 soon.
=P
thank you for reading and commenting!!!
*gives cupcakes
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i had trouble reading the rest of it because my eyes were pretty foggy...
i love it!!
it made me cry, but i love it..
fanfics don't usually make me cry..
well-written ones do it's a sad story. >:[
Hayato's growing up.. yay!
for a minute there i thought that the "young man" was Kame. but after i read that it was a teenager, i figured it was Hayato.
looking forward to chappy 5
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*hands tissue box*
gomen for the trouble.
=)
you love it???
ahhhh, me so happiiiiii!!!!!
lol. yes yes, that's hayato.
he's a big boy now!
thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!
=)
will do my best on chappie 5
*gives cupcakes
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it's not trouble -sniff-
*sees the cupcakes and shares with you
Will wait eagerly.
-smiles with a mouthful of cupcakes-
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hayato's growing up~
you're excited too?
everyone wants the big boy, neee ;)
i will do my best on chappie 5. i think older hayato will be harder to write.
i can't put his dialogue as baby talks anymore. *pouts*
lol
demo, gambarimasu!!!!!
thank you so much for reading and commenting~
*gives cupcakes*
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i'm glad you still read and follow this.
and even more glad you like it!!! :D
i'll do my best on chappie 5, and special happiness
i do have the next chappie for it, but it's just sooo boring, i don't want to torture you with boredom. lol
gomen ne
but, i'll do my best!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!!
*gives cupcakes*
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i never think of it that way!!!!!
*huggiezzz*
thank you so much!!!
=D
i will do my best!!!!!!
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