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Temptation--Ed/Hei fanfic

Aug 29, 2009 15:54

Title: Temptation
Author: peace_of_hope
Pairing: Ed/Heiderich
Genre: angst, romance, non-con
Rating: NC-17
Words: 2845
Spoilers/Warnings: rape, non-con, mind-fuck, verbal and physical abuse, did I mention rape?
Summary: Alfons is tempted by a golden fallen angel and decides to take what he thinks is his

( Fiery red with a forked tail, horns, and a three-pronged poker, that was the classical Devil as had been taught to Alfons, although he knew that was a myth, lies, for the Devil was truly golden )

Comments 4

darkblysse August 29 2009, 23:28:22 UTC

Oh, hush... xD That was pure bloody luck you picked my prompt, ffff.

And I still love it~! *Mems*

hanyou_katie September 7 2009, 18:09:07 UTC

Its well written and all... but I just can't really see Alfons raping someone. Its good tho! It really is. Just kinda OOC.

bitofa December 12 2009, 01:52:38 UTC

Um, did I miss something?

I mean, this is quite the well written story, but.. I have to agree with hanyou_katie. I don't think Alfons would rape anybody under any circumstances. He seems more likely to be the one who gets raped, actually.. And Edward? I thought he would start fighting Alfons, convincing himself that it's just Envy with Alfons' appearance, and he's not actually hurting his friend.

I just don't get it, really.

peace_of_hope December 12 2009, 02:31:22 UTC

This is to fit the kinkmeme request and really, I wrote it to make darkblysse happy, which, she liked it and that's all that matters. If I made the OP happy, then I'm happy.

This story may not be plausible, but fanfic doesn't have to be. That's the fun of fanfic, being about the write out the implausible and impossible.