Mistaken- (not done, struggling to wrap it up)

[peacechloe]

I am told God makes no mistakes,

So I am mistaken this is the way

god made me

I am mistaken that I was born

Short one penis two catholic parents and wirh an acceptable sexual orientation to be anything I want

Teachers were mistaken when they told me I could be anything I wanted

And I was mistaken when I said I wanted to be the pope

Because

Comments

[peacechloe]

well-
its like all the thoughts are there but I am having a hard time organizing them and wrapping them up.

I will figure it out I suppose.
Thanks for reading :)

[conqueror49worm]

I must be mistaken that with no woman,
Man would have nothing to be the head of
And with no mary, there would be no Christ
And with no Christ, I would be able to marry

I love that part.
The thoughts are definitely there, and I can see where you're going with it. Don't feel like this has to be your final draft, or whatever. With some editing/reformatting, it could be even better :)

[peacechloe]

There are like, so many lines that can be made to be like those ones-
I have just been staring at it for a couple months now and I decided I should start working on it,
but alas, nothing has come.