Comments | peacockzitao: cat's got claws (and they're in deep)

peacockzitao

cat's got claws (and they're in deep)

Jan 14, 2015 14:55

Rating: NC-17
Pairing: baekchen
Length: 3.3k
Summary: baekhyun screws up part two. sequel to bite that bark back
Warnings: humiliation again i guess, also this entire fic is terrible
Notes: this has been sitting in drive for like a half a year and i finally finished it. it's shit but it's finally fucking done, so thank god for that i guess.
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c: chen, r: nc-17, p: baekhyun/chen, c: baekhyun

Comments 9

sakurai_11 January 15 2015, 18:58:19 UTC

NOW I'M GOING TO CRY. I EXPECTED A GOOD ENDING. WHY. (i love you anyway BUT STILL)

i mean. NO. YOU CAN'T. Please. don't be so cruel. don't do that. why can't they have a happy ending.

I love you though. Because this is beautiful - but i need them to be happy. Ugh, i need chen to understand that baekhyun is a fucking dick but it's cute anyway so. he can give him a chance. JONGDAE. GO GET HIM.

(i'm in love with you for this, btw. i'm not going to hate you, just a little bit. <3 <3 <3 )

peacockzitao January 18 2015, 18:19:51 UTC

I CAN AND I WILL AND YOU CAN"T STOP ME!!!
i'm glad you enjoyed it tho ahhhhhhhhhh :')
(and luv u too <333)

sakurai_11 January 18 2015, 18:34:36 UTC

GNAAAAAAAAAAAA PLEASE. Why don't you write a third part? They say third is a charm <3 This is going to make me suffer for the rest of the year. I know. I'm going to come here and read again and again this fic and cry because THEY'RE NOT GOING TO BE TOGETHER WHYDOYOUMAKEMESUFFERLIKETHAT ALEKRJHGGEHGLDRHGLHEALRGH *cries*

I enjoyed it a lot, obviously <3 Love you~ <3

peacockzitao January 24 2015, 02:09:52 UTC

i mean i do have a third part vaguely in mind but it'll probably follow the pattern of the second soooooo..... have fun waiting another half a year sorry ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

ubiquitousecho January 21 2015, 02:07:40 UTC

i'm broken, you broke me how could you do that hoW COULD YOU BREAK ME LIKE THAT?

i can't believe baekhyun tried to put the blame of his love confession on his friends thAT WAS HILARIOUS. omg

I agree with the comment above, why can't they have a happy endings sobs happy endings good bUT IT'S OKAY because this was still a nice fic ouo thank you~

peacockzitao January 24 2015, 02:10:43 UTC

well....... i'd say........ i broke u just like that.
i mEAN WHAT ELSE COULD HE DO THERE?????? jongdae was not havin it
baekhyun does not get happy endings. not from me. MAYBE SOMEDAY GLAD U ENJOYED

lazyscrawls January 24 2015, 19:32:24 UTC

this is gold ohmygod

baek is so dumb and so cute

the last few lines broke me aw

<3

peacockzitao March 17 2015, 01:26:01 UTC

I NEVER SAW THIS OMG
expert heartbreaker peacockzitao that's me :-))
GLAD U ENJOYED

theshadowsdance August 12 2015, 07:38:58 UTC

Lol jongdae is a dick but this way it feels more real. not everything can turn unicorn and rainbow from only 3 encounters, not to mention it's added with bad impression as well

i love how jongdae is kinda mean, and it's reasonable that he doesn't really like baekhyun but still poor baekhyun lmao but he's pretty stupid too, so

this is nice