xmfc snippet (au, charles/always-a-girl!Erik, underage)

Oct 30, 2013 21:28

Hello, friends. Here, have 2200 words of teenage Charles/girl!Erik make-outs.

you've had a hold on me )

x-men:writing

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afrocurl October 31 2013, 04:59:40 UTC
I love this view of Erika - strong willed, but still nervous - and how Charles works around all of her pitfalls to make everything closer to what she's wanted and not what he might want.

I think that speaks to something else that might be later on in their relationship.

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pearl_o November 6 2013, 19:44:39 UTC
Thank you so much! You always leave such thoughtful comments, I hope you know how much I appreciate it.

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kernezelda October 31 2013, 11:23:53 UTC
This is a fine depiction of them, Erika fierce and proud and choosing what she wants, declaring what she wants, even though it's a scary step. And Charles, exploring himself, trying to figure out his best friend, and being so careful with his response until the two of them find that this between them is exactly what they want. Lovely!

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pearl_o November 6 2013, 19:45:17 UTC
Thank you! This was stuck in my head for a while, so I'm glad other people liked it, too. <3

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anonymous November 1 2013, 08:55:40 UTC
This fic was absolutely wonderful, Erika character was spot on. Their relationship seems so hard, but yet so young and hopeful at the same time.

I almost missed this fic because it wasn't on AO3, and now it makes me wonder how much more of you're lovely writing I've missed before.

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pearl_o November 6 2013, 19:46:56 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

I didn't post it on AO3 because it didn't feel quite like a full story to me, and somehow it stressed me out less to just post it to lj in the circumstances. Even when it's not posted to AO3, though, I do make sure to tag everything on lj under the "xmen:writing" tag, so hopefully you haven't missed much.

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