The Names That Make A Man

[pearlstar178]

Title: The nams that make a man
Pairing(s):McCoy/OFC and McCoy/Kirk
Rating: R
Length:2638 ish
Warning(s):implied abuse and death, crossposted @ Trek_HC Summary:Leonard McCoy has gone by many names. A diffent name for a different phase of life

Comments

[sororexitium]

That was absolutely beautiful. It was so breath taking watching the different stages of McCoy and I could really see him in my mind as he changed. It was so believable.

Can't wait for Jim's side.

[pearlstar178]

Oh thank you! I'm glad that you found it believable.:) Thanks so much for reading.

[pearlstar178]

Thanks! Jim's parts should be coming this weekend.

[secretsolitaire]

Ooh, this is beautiful. These lines are so powerful:

Halfway through the summer his uncle finds him crouched in the hay half asleep and then Lenny learns that some things are unexplainable. He learns a lesson in silence that it takes years to unlearn.

And so is this one:

“My legs gonna be like… fucking steel.” Just like his heart, just like everything else in the world the breaks.

(Though I think you want "that" instead of "the" before "breaks." < /unsolicited beta >

[pearlstar178]

I'm glad you liked it! Also, thank you for pointing out my typo. ( I fixed it) I do appreciate it!

[pearlstar178]

Thanks! I always was intrigued by how McCoy had so many nicknames in fanfiction. It made sense to me that he would have quite the backstory to go with each one.

[pearlstar178]

The smell of roses is quite heavenly isn’t it? Ahh I'm glad that you liked Leonard's love life. I just always imagined that he did, at least at some point, love or think he loved Jocelyn. Thank you for your kind review.