A smile through the water

[pearlstar178]

Author: pearlstar178
Written for: The very talented crazywriter10 who asked for water and a broken bone.
Fandom: AOS
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Characters/Pairings: Spock/ Kirk
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: I don’t own Star Trek
Summary As the relationship between the captain and his first officer progress they celebrate a significant

Comments

[pearlstar178]

I'm very glad you liked it! Thank you so much.

[crazywriter10]

This was absolutely beautiful. I loved that you really kept the water throughout (don't ask me what I was thinking when I asked for that) and it was just absolutely lovely.

Thank you very, very much. :)

[pearlstar178]

Glad you liked it! Your icon makes me think of the ocean :) I started out writing the other pairing and other part of the prompt you asked for but it was a big fail. I will eventually finish it and post it though.

[dante_s_hell]

I liked this very much! Thanks for sharing!

[pearlstar178]

I'm glad! Thanks for running such an awesome comm!

[danahid]

Lovely.

(There were some odd word choices (e.g., "shared conciseness" versus "shared consciousness") that made me think you may want to look over the fic with an editing eye, but they didn't detract from the overall effect of the story.)

[pearlstar178]

Thank you!

( I'm really sorry about strange typos and word choices. They will be fixed.)

[easilymused1956]

Lovely, sweet story. I liked that moment with Spock and Sarek very much. Learning things from dreamers and in dreams is very clever.

Renee

[pearlstar178]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I'm fascinated by dreams and sleep talking. The idea that something so private as a dream could be shared and used as a form of communication always seems like a good thing to explore. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!