ship's night

[pearlstar178]

Prompt:7
Rating:PG
Warnings: none
Word Count:~2,000
Summary: Late at night Bones talks to /yells at Jim while he's in a coma.
A/N: The only thing I own are the typos. Which I guess is pretty impressive. (in perarlville everyone speaks and writes like captcha)

For Jim's POV please check out the AMAZING Baby,you can lay me down by the wicked

Comments

[vivid_moment]

Made my heartache, but bones still being, well grumpy really helped. I really loved this, and that Jim could hear him. The toothpaste was a lovely touch ♥

[pearlstar178]

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you for reading.

[pearlstar178]

Thank you! Even in the dead of night, worried out of his mind, Bone's mouth seemed to not have off button.

[fritz42]

I loved this. It was so typical of Bones to have him bitching and grumbling his fears to Jim like that. I loved finding out all those little things about Jim and their relationship that Bones grumbled about. I especially loved the little minty heart on the mirror. Only Bones would go on and on about the mess with the toothpaste.

I also loved how we knew immediately that Jim was awake just with the position he was in.

Great story!

"T"

[pearlstar178]

I'm really glad that you liked it and that the little details of relationship came through. Your comment made my morning! Thank you.

[treksnoopy]

If ever one man could bitch another out with so much love it's Bones to Jim.
This was wonderful.

[pearlstar178]

I'm glad you liked it! Bones does have a unique way of showing his love.

fic: baby, you can lay me down.

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