Myshuno Prompts #10, #11, #12, #13, & #14

[peasant007]

I decided that I will make that big push for a Myshuno Blackout (especially now that my eyeballs aren't melting out of my head).  Only ten more to go!

Here is my card for everything so far.  I hope you like them!

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Prompt: Puck and Erin's Honeymoon
Characters: Puck Summerdream and Erin Devereaux
Rating: PG
Summary: A conversation between Puck and Erin

Comments

[silverbelle1220]

#10: This is just lovely. I'm sorry to hear that things are not great for the Devereaux family, but Erin is right - all that stuff can be reearned. I'm glad Puck & Erin got to have a few days of a getaway, even if it's not exactly what they wanted.

#11: I laughed at the description of potty training the twins, and then snerked when Rhys turned it into one of THOSE phone calls.

#12: Erin trying to get into Rhys' good graces is too adorable. As was Quinn making what he thought was Rhys' drink.

#13: Absolutely heartwrenching. I have nothing more to say than that.

#14: It's kind of nice to see that Mary is still Mary even in the after life. But it's also disappointing in a way; I'd hoped she'd gained a bit more perspective on things. But man, when Quinn showed up and she realized what it meant, wow. That was good.

Great job with all of them. I hope you can get the rest of your prompts written!

[peasant007]

10. Things are going to become rather frustrating for the main family, there's no way around that.

11. A lot of things in my story involving toddlers is ripped off from RL and my twin nieces. At just less than two and a half years old they are mostly potty trained except for the entire pants thing. I thought it was amusing so I had to throw it in :)

12. I sort of imagine that this wasn't an isolated incident of the twin's being kissasses in an attempt to become ungrounded, which is why Rhys was more or less, "Oh God whatever" about it.

13. I really wanted to do something with Rhys and what was going through his mind during that time seeing as there was no text on the slides during that scene. 160 words was hard enough. I'm glad I didn't get into great detail in the chapter.

14. Mary is..Mary. *shrugs* It's like, she's not terrible. Not entirely. It's just that Rhys is a huge hot button for her. There's more to it but I can't get into it right now. /spoilers

I'm glad you liked them!

[scribal_goddess]

*Sniffles.*

Apple juice on the rocks was pretty awesome, though.

[peasant007]

*hands over tissue*

I was drinking apple juice with ice the other day and I noticed that it sort of looks like scotch. So I pretended to sip it like you would with scotch. Like a sir madam. Good thing Keith finds my weirdness endearing :)

[scribal_goddess]

I wouldn't know if it looks like Scotch (Dad drinks beer, Mom drinks Rum and Coke, my drinking experience so far has been concentrated on the kind of drinks that carry parasols,) but it was adorable as all hell.

Also, I was going to mention the Rhys pleading scene. It was perfect.

[peasant007]

To be honest, I don't really know either as neither Keith nor I drink scotch.

Aw, thanks :)

[ms_norrington]

#10 I like this moment between them. I like how Erin growing up in a family where love wasn't verbally expressed hasn't made her incapable of saying it herself

[peasant007]

10. But she has never said it to Puck until now. She just didn't realize it. Fortunately, unlike her father, she doesn't get all bent out of shape about the word.

11. Oh man, the potty training thing is totally ripped off of RL. My twin nieces are almost potty trained except for their issues with pants. At Christmas they were wearing pretty little dresses with no undies underneath (which was okay seeing as my sister is the one who hosted Christmas).

12. Mary was rather brittle towards the end. And, oh man, if only martinis were only olive juice. Gin is disgusting!

14. That is exactly how I wanted to show Mary. It is a shame that nobody alive will see this side of Mary though. However...well, I'm not saying anything more /spoilers

[rosefyre]

Eyeballs not melting = of the good. I swear, it's like the Christmas to get sick in the box - you, me, Lily, and Jess all have...something. Bah.

I'm glad Erin and Puck at least don't have THAT issue with saying I love you - the other issues are going to be quite enough, it looks like! The fact that their relationship is super solid is of the good.

Oh, Rhys. I totally got that it was an electric blanket way before he did. *shakes head*

Love how much the kids try to get out of the grounding. So not going to work, though. I also find it hilarious that Quinn thinks Rhys is drinking apple juice every night, because, um, no.

*shakes head* Oh, Rhys. *hugs him*

Oh, Mary. I'm glad she's at least gained a teensy bit of perspective in the afterlife, even if it took her grandson dying to get there. *hugs her*

[peasant007]

Thankfully it seemed that Christmas day is when it all came to a head. It's starting to die down a little bit and now it's just a cold.

Erin really, truly didn't realize that she had never said "I love you" to Puck. But, yeah, she's her father's daughter, just...without Rhys' issues (if that makes sense).

LOL. You know, I think Rhys was 85% sure it was an electric blanket as well. OTOH, it's not like he isn't aware of Eden having possessions of certain...things.

My sister was quite the kiss ass whenever she was grounded. I wasn't. I always fought with my parents, which led to my groundings lasting even longer. I think those last two weeks were an eternity for Rhys as well because, according to my mother, when you ground your kid, you're essentially grounded yourself.

I really wanted to show Mary gaining that bit of perspective *nods*

[katee412]

These were beautiful, you really have developed some incredible characters!