Comments | peasant007: Myshuno Prompts #15 & #16

peasant007

Myshuno Prompts #15 & #16

Dec 27, 2012 23:33

Here is my card so far. I hope you like these :)

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Prompt: Green is Better than Red
Characters: Rhys and Eden
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Myshuno Prompt #15 provided by lauriempress This takes place right after Rhys and Eden's argument in 6.6A after Bella had shamed Eden into wearing a different color than red.
Word Count: 765

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( She hated going to bed angry. )

sims 2, myshuno, devereaux legacy, drabbles

Comments 6

rosefyre December 28 2012, 09:04:21 UTC

Awww, I'm glad Rhys and Eden can deal with their issues, but Bella...yeah, she's a bitch in this verse.

And love Quinn's essay. I am highly amused by the nippel clams. :P

peasant007 December 28 2012, 18:44:39 UTC

Yeah, they deal with their issues...sort of. It's not like Rhys apologized though (because he wouldn't), nor did he really say that he wasn't disappointed (he's not, but he's not going to say that). I imagine most of their arguments went like this.

LOL. The hardest part was making sure it was only 100 words.

silverbelle1220 December 28 2012, 16:06:58 UTC

#15: Poor Eden. I feel bad for her a lot of the time because she got crap all sides (her mother, and then her daughter-in-law). But thank goodness for Rhys being there to help her get a bit of perspective.

#16: OMG, that was funny. I'm now imagining the phone call or note from his teacher and the conversation Rhys and Eden had with Quinn after that. :)

peasant007 December 28 2012, 18:50:01 UTC

Eden is a fairly mellow person, so she's able to weather it most of the time. Rhys does help her gain a bit of perspective. Unfortunately he doesn't realize that he's often times a source of her frustration as well.

I wanted to add a teacher's note at the bottom. Something like, "Quinn, see me after class." And then Rhys' signature (because Quinn would have had to have it signed by a parent) with an extra note saying, "Well they do!" I'm also seeing Rhys and Eden being as solemn as possible until Quinn leaves the room and them collapsing with laughter. I think the funniest part (personally) isn't the "inpromtoo nippel clams" part, but Quinn's reasoning behind what exactly "nippel clams" are.

scribal_goddess December 28 2012, 23:45:16 UTC

I am so lucky I wasn't drinking anything when I read that last one...

smoothiegarten December 29 2012, 02:52:30 UTC

Oh, Quinn. Oh, sweetheart. No, honey. *shakes head and tries not to laugh* Also WTF PAPER CLIPS AS NIPPLE CLAMPS NO THANK YOU *punches Rhys*

Re: the first one--at least they talked about it? *kicks Bella on principle*