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tatdatcm January 22 2013, 05:55:06 UTC
[Spoiler (click to open)]Bottom is even scarier than Lillian. Am I imagining some sexual tension between those two women or did you intend to imply that?

There were some nice warm fuzzies in here for Zane. Finally. Glad that he is finally getting some closure over Tina and that Thaddeus is finally gone. I loved how Remington was able to be the hero and become the new pet reaper. He looks much better in blue, and I can't wait for his and Cassandra's story to continue. They make a great couple.

Poor Emily! I knew it was coming, but it's still so sad to see.

Heh, Fifty Shades of Green! *snerk* Still haven't read the real life novel, but I bet Rhys's version is infinitely better. ;)

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peasant007 January 22 2013, 07:46:06 UTC
Bottom is supposed to be a bit scarier, but believe it or not, she would consider herself one of the "good guys" if asked.

Am I imagining some sexual tension between those two women or did you intend to imply that?It is not intentional at all, however it seems that the Bottom/Lillian club is forming, lol ( ... )

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tatdatcm January 22 2013, 17:17:47 UTC
Bottom is supposed to be a bit scarier, but believe it or not, she would consider herself one of the "good guys" if asked.

I think that is exactly why she is scarier. Her motivations are righteous in her eyes. It's like a Bottom Jihad.

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peasant007 January 22 2013, 19:11:18 UTC
Bottom is Lawful Evil, though there are some Lawful Neutral aspects to her (she has more LN traits than LE traits when I looked it up just now). The only thing is that a LN character would not help criminals.

http://easydamus.com/lawfulneutral.html
http://easydamus.com/lawfulevil.html

I've always found any character who is under the Lawful alignment to be very zealous and, quite frankly, rather irritating.

Lillian, for the record, is pure Chaotic Evil.

http://easydamus.com/chaoticevil.html

She just wants to watch the world burn for no other reason than it's fun to play with fire. Marshmallows taste good, too.

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dumdeedumdumdum January 22 2013, 06:03:51 UTC
Is it wrong that Bottom x Lillian shot into my head?

Anyway, not-zombie!Remington and black not being a requirement are good stuff. So is Zane getting out of his angst mode. Hmm Zane and Cassandra makes for an interesting couple.

Cheers!

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mzyra January 22 2013, 06:26:39 UTC
*Hands out Bottom/Lillian club notices* We regret nothing.

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leilia January 22 2013, 06:41:36 UTC
But only if Bottom tops.

And I am definitely a card carrying member of that group.

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peasant007 January 22 2013, 07:52:10 UTC
This is how Max/SJ started. The only thing is that I'm not nearly as good at writing smut as Prof and Doc :P

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bellemistoire January 22 2013, 08:32:57 UTC
I'm afraid I have to 5ths on the Bottom/Lillian thing. Are you sure that wasn't intentional?

Yay for Zane! I like the new Zane very much!

Poor Emily. Sigh.

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peasant007 January 22 2013, 19:27:14 UTC
LOL. I'm positive it wasn't intentional. Shoulder Devil Rhys would have told me otherwise. Then again, he would find it amusing to not mention it so he can watch me go, "WHERE IS THIS ALL COMING FROM?!"

New Zane will be able to bend in the wind instead of breaking *nods*

:( Yeah, poor Emily indeed.

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bellemistoire January 23 2013, 02:05:50 UTC
I get the feeling that New!Zane might also be willing to possibly create some wind that might blow other people down, from time to time if circumstances seems appropriate rather than sit on the park bench going, "Oh, too bad about the lack of wind over there."

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katmiesterk8 January 22 2013, 11:23:06 UTC
Yay for Cass and Zane! :D

Wooo! No more Thaddeus!

D: Poor, poor Emily.

I'm so glad to see Remington finally getting a "life" of his own.

This was stupendous as always, Ang. :)

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peasant007 January 22 2013, 19:41:36 UTC
Cass and Zane are very cute together :)

Thaddeus was getting pretty useless anyway *nods*

*sigh* Yeah, poor Emily.

Remington will be having a slightly larger role in the future (as opposed to a background character who is occasionally mentioned in passing). Life will be good for him :)

Thanks!

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hurricanetaylor January 22 2013, 12:42:04 UTC
Brilliant chapter.

Zane & Cassandra are adorable and I love how your making Cassandra prophetic too like her name sake.

Your version of Bottom is a hard ass. I love it! She's a teensy bit OCD though on the organisation and cleanliness. Did you decide that based on in game personality? I've never played the Summerdreams so I don't know what she's meant to be like.

I loved that Remington was given a fresh start too

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peasant007 January 22 2013, 20:53:20 UTC
Thanks!

...Cassandra has a name sake? *shifty eyes* YES! Totally intentional!

To be honest, I have no idea what Bottom's exact stats are, but she's a Maxis Pre-Made so I'm sure it's pretty middle of the road. I just have this idea of her wanting the be the best because she feels that she'll never be as special as Puck would have been had he kept his Reaper/Fate powers. Plus I needed to differentiate between Bottom's evilness and Lillian's.

I didn't realize it when I was sketching out the outline, but Remington totally was the co-star of the show. He's been bumped up to at least a tertiary character now instead of being a minor background character with a line or two. He's not going to be a main star, but he will be coming up more often as Generation 7 gets older/Generation 8 hits the scene.

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