autumn pantoum

Sep 18, 2008 17:05


the autumn breeze has finally come
whispering gently to me
these tales I have not heard
for a thousand years

whispering gently to me
beneath a sacred fortress of trees
for a thousand years
and I remember . . .

beneath a sacred fortress of trees
breathing ancient sunsets
and I remember . . .
blessed with bonfire ashes

breathing ancient sunsets
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where the orange meets the juice cadillac8 September 19 2008, 00:39:21 UTC
Poetwhore says:

keep this up.

You talk out your mouth about a thousand times a day;
so you can write so freely. (altho it is waaay slower than speaking. Usually.)

But it can be done, and well.

There is no difference between writing and speaking, says me.

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