Comments | peganix: How to Keep Your Mouth Shut, Danny/Steve

peganix

How to Keep Your Mouth Shut, Danny/Steve

Feb 03, 2011 05:10

I go away for months and come back with the longest fic I've ever written, in a fandom I really did not expect to get interested in, for a couple of buddy cops. I don't know. Also I moved to DW (I'm 'primetime' over there), though I'll be crossposting hopefully - it failed this time because the entry was too long? I don't know. Also I set up a AO3 ( Read more... )

hawaii 5-0 fic, my fic

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huntress69 February 3 2011, 05:46:25 UTC

Oh wow, you took me on a whole range of emotions here, giggling one minute, angsting the next and you did it so well. Thanks for sharing this, much appreciated.

peganix February 4 2011, 16:37:40 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy it took you on a ride :)

michele659 February 3 2011, 06:20:33 UTC

Wonderful! That was was sexy and funny and angsty and even romantic,and I enjoyed it very much.
Poor Danny-I had to laugh though at Chin showing up just when he's getting a blow job(in full dress uniform and shielding his eyes,lol)and later saying he got to see Danny's moves.:)

peganix February 4 2011, 16:38:09 UTC

Thank you! Hahaha, I feel for Chin, too. :)

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peganix February 4 2011, 16:38:36 UTC

Thank you so much! That's a lot to love this \o/

and_ed February 3 2011, 07:00:46 UTC

Loved this! Great characterizations. And that ending cracked me up. Well done. *applause*

peganix February 4 2011, 16:39:10 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you thought they were well-characterized! :)

bellalaine February 3 2011, 07:21:48 UTC

Hee! Pining!

Great job!

peganix February 4 2011, 16:39:30 UTC

Thank you so much! I love some good pining :)