Comments | peganix: How to Keep Your Mouth Shut, Danny/Steve

peganix

How to Keep Your Mouth Shut, Danny/Steve

Feb 03, 2011 05:10

I go away for months and come back with the longest fic I've ever written, in a fandom I really did not expect to get interested in, for a couple of buddy cops. I don't know. Also I moved to DW (I'm 'primetime' over there), though I'll be crossposting hopefully - it failed this time because the entry was too long? I don't know. Also I set up a AO3 ( Read more... )

hawaii 5-0 fic, my fic

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americandirrty February 3 2011, 22:45:23 UTC

This is so perfect. I love it!

peganix February 4 2011, 17:00:29 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm happy you liked it! :)

ellel February 4 2011, 15:24:00 UTC

Oh,that was great!I adore pining!Steve and your Danny was awesome-I enjoyed Danny hooking up with Brian and Steve getting all jealous about it!Loved it:)

peganix February 4 2011, 17:00:56 UTC

Thank you so much! Pining and jealousy are two of my favorite tropes too. :)

lankyguy February 4 2011, 19:59:31 UTC

This was wonderful, the characters were spot on. I loved every bit of it.

peganix February 6 2011, 01:58:46 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad the characters felt right!

lankyguy February 6 2011, 02:50:52 UTC

You did a spectacular job in keeping them in character. Thank you for writing. I'm adding it to my memories.

bachlava February 5 2011, 05:25:56 UTC

I would like to leave a proper comment on this right now, but I am really tired. So I will just say: this is an excellent fic on every level. So many thanks for it.

peganix February 6 2011, 01:59:24 UTC

Thank you so much! This is definitely a proper comment, I really appreciate it! :)

imkalena February 8 2011, 10:04:49 UTC

THAT. IS AWESOME.

Danny outed! Steve interested, but thwarted in his quest!

Because Danny can't talk about it! Nobody can talk about it!

Except for the team giving Danny shit about it, of course.

“I think I might be into guys,” Steve says, and Danny punches him, hard, right in the shoulder as Steve cackles, more chipper than Danny’s ever seen him.

Beautiful assholishness, and what else could it be between these men you have made?

peganix March 1 2011, 05:02:06 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting! I absolutely love the phrase "beautiful assholishness", I think that's probably going to be the most apt way to describe any H5-0 fic I ever write. Thank you again (and so sorry for the late reply!)