Map and Track, Olivia/Viola, R

[peganix]

Map and Track, for amathela as part of femslash08.
She's the Man, Olivia/Viola, R, 2759 words

Comments

[pene]

this is gorgeous. I love the brightness and lack of complexity. It feels natural. and the end is sexy and adorable.

[peganix]

Thank you so much! :)

[aaronlisa]

I really liked this. It seemed like a natural conclusion to what happened in the movie.

[peganix]

Thank you! I'm glad to hear it worked well with the movie canon.

[ijemanja]

Really nice, I love it!

[peganix]

Thank you so much!

[amathela]

Oh, thank you thank you thank you! I was secretly hoping that this prompt would be written, though I wasn't really expecting it, so you made my day just by writing this! I really loved it - the swimming and the carnival and the kissing (especially the kissing), and the awkward tension that seems to hang over them in the middle, and the way they're so happy at the end. It was just completely awesome, so thank you :D

[peganix]

I wasn't expecting to write this fandom either! But I wasn't familar with most of your fandoms and then your prompt made me start thinking and then this happened. I'm so glad you liked it! I hope the happy ending made up for the lack of rom-com shenanigans :)

[marenfic]

Aww! The first paragraph, yes. YES. That's the way I've always felt about what Olivia must be thinking. Sebastian is not the guy she fell for, Viola is. I love the awkwardness of this, the clumsy way they flirt and interact. It's so good.

Yay for you and your recipient.

[peganix]

Thank you so much! Yeah, poor Olivia, expected to date this guy she's barely met. And your icon is hilarious, Amanda Bynes' face!