* Beta Reader: Suzotchka * Character Spotlight: - John and Elizabeth * Story Rating : T * Temp Summary: Elizabeth speaks about the present but tells of the past
I take it all back. Bravo. That's a great twist on a first person narrative. And you've started with a teaser - a bold move in a fic, not something I've seen before (I don't read a lot of them though).
This is actually much much better than the previous bit you posted. Ignore everything I say from now on, it will be much easier ;)
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This is actually much much better than the previous bit you posted. Ignore everything I say from now on, it will be much easier ;)
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