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[peki]

And here's chapter 1.

Title: Through the looking glass (1/?)
Genre: Twins gen
Rating: PG13
Summary: Tom falls asleep one night and wakes up in a place he never thought he'd see again. Five years ago, Tom falls asleep one night and wakes up in a place he couldn't wait to see. Will they get back where they belong?

Comments

[strssna]

The last line gets me every time ♥
I remember back when you originally had just the idea, and I'm so proud (and astonished at your skills!) for pulling it off so wonderfully.

[peki]

Yeah, this one seems to have moved from idea to realization pretty quickly. I have no clue why, suddenly it just came to me :) Whee! ♥

[jellypencil]

Oh oh, chaptered fic from you! =D How incredibly exciting!

I love the idea of this, Tom who is focused on the past and younger Tom who is focused on the future, and then switching them so they really are in that time.

I especially liked being able to see the twins right before their album sale, David calling and Bill being so excited. It's like being able to peek in on the past, knowing where the twins are going when they don't, and then Tom moving to the future. It seemed to fit really well to me.

Older Tom arguing with tiny Bill is adorable -- the age difference between them really highlights their characters, and I'm so curious what older Bill and younger Tom are doing, if we'll get to see that!

[peki]

Older Bill and bb!Tom are up next - I debated whether to focus on just Tom in the past, but the other way round was too fun to pass up :) I hope this'll turn out amusing throughout, I have a few chapters written and it's mostly fluff, but who knows where it's going. I certainly don't! *g*

Glad you're enjoying this beginning. Hope you'll like the rest! Thank you ♥

[amythystluna]

Heeee! I love the image of "our" Tom out of place in a too-small room, like some sort of oddball Alice-in-Wonderland moment :D (And art supplies! Eeee! :D )

Scrappy!Bill is <3, and their mom is just awesome.