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[longbca]

Because I'm lazy I am simply going to copy and paste my previous comment, Lol:

Wonderful update! This chp was great! Is this line perhaps a mention of a certain rapper which lusts after Bill: “Where I’m from, you like German rappers.” ????

Furzry is right- you have a wonderful way with words...I could totally imagine Bill sitting on Tom's feet eating Gummy worms...and having them all gang up on each other was great- and having them all looking at Tom's body was a lovely touch- though when Georg gets muscles Tom will have competition...Lol!

I am sad there is only two chps left- very sad indeed...however i hope you do decide to do more from this verse.

[tearose99]

oh wow I love the ending of this chapter! it makes me so nostalgic to picture them before they were famous, and you've painted a very good picture <3

[strssna]

I'm having a field day imagining Bill by Tom's feet, eating gummi worms and probably calling it exercise after they're done.

And now, there'll be a right Tom for every Bill ♥