Hi, Ku. :)

Sep 02, 2005 15:42

Life is but a dream:
Careful not to wake too fast
Roses still need sniffed

haiku

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pkrat September 27 2005, 20:16:49 UTC
You know, I have to comment because it's driving me crazy.

"Roses need sniffing" is less broken than your tense-mangling "sniffed". :)

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pelt September 28 2005, 01:27:40 UTC
I agree, 'Roses need sniffing' would have fit much better. That line has been bugging me too, didn't catch the tense snaffu.

Thanks!

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