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Hi, Ku. :)
Sep 02, 2005 15:42
Life is but a dream:
Careful not to wake too fast
Roses still need sniffed
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pkrat
September 27 2005, 20:16:49 UTC
You know, I have to comment because it's driving me crazy.
"Roses need sniffing" is less broken than your tense-mangling "sniffed". :)
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pelt
September 28 2005, 01:27:40 UTC
I agree, 'Roses need sniffing' would have fit much better. That line has been bugging me too, didn't catch the tense snaffu.
Thanks!
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"Roses need sniffing" is less broken than your tense-mangling "sniffed". :)
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Thanks!
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