Hubris - Chapter 1/? [The Gazette - Reita/Ruki; to be revealed]

[pelting_rain]

Title: Hubris
Author: pelting_rainRating: NC17

Comments

[meow_alot]

this is interesting. I wanna read more. xD
but....poor Ruki-kun. D:

[pelting_rain]

D:

[orion_love]

argh~ poor ruki >.<
its great that Ruki's got some spirit in him though :D
and the appearance of kai! yay ~! xD

d(>.<)b

[pelting_rain]

Kai finally makes his appearance. (:

[tohru349]

*squeals* I love Kai! And I like how you're using their stagenames and real names...rather than being psuedonyms in front of fans, it's for mob-purposes...did that make sense? O.o anyway, great chapter. :D

[pelting_rain]

Umm kind of? heh thanks (:

[akiruu]

Ooohhh... why did I have the idea that that him would be Uruha? but then Kai made his appearance... xD

Well, I guess it's only natural for Ruki to hate Akira, I mean, I'd hate him if he treated me that way, too!! *nods*

Poor Ruki, tho. It must suck to have only half of your memories with you and not so nice ones on top of that *pats Ruki* Well.. I hope Kai can do something to keep him distracted and make him "forget" about his hatred towards Akira.

I'm really curious about Ruki's past, mostly about what happened in that gap between his last memory and the present! (Did that question make sense?) xD

Anyway... I like how this story is progressing! The characters personalities, the descriptions of the scenery, thoughts, attitudes and dialogues make it more realistic! Yay! I'm seeing the improvement in your writing skills, girl!! Awesome!! :DD (I can tell because I've read all of your fics xD) Keep up the good work!! :D

Thankies for this chappie, hon! I really liked it! *sends cookies*
<3!

[pelting_rain]

*laughs* Well, as a spoiler here, you might want to start paying close attention to Ruki, his actions gives off hints to his past, and for once in my fics, there are incredible twists. (: AWW yeah I'm trying to hit a new level of writing. No probs dear. <3

[silveryxdark]

So good, once again. I love the mystery here, and how Ruki isn't all weak~and scared~. Understandably afraid when Reita starts shoving him and yelling at him, but I like that he fights back and shows so much... spirit in him. Rei sounds pretty nice when he wants to be... kind of conflicted, actually, like he doesn't really want to care for Ruki but finds himself doing so anyway. Aoi seems interesting, really, and Kai seems nice enough but I suspect more to him. ^_^
Sorry for rambling! I loved it though, keep up the good work~!

[pelting_rain]

The characters here are going to be pretty complicated, and I'm glad the personalities of each and every character got through, since they make up a very important part of the story. (: Thanks for commenting dear. ^^