Fighting Back

[pemphredouk]

Title: Fighting Back
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters: Michael, Sara, Lincoln, LJ,OC, Alex, Sofia Gretchen and Whistler
Rating: Probably NC-17 after the first few chapters
Summary: Michael and Sara discover things, good and bad about themselves as they finally start fighting back. All locations mentioned in the story actually exist and can be found

Comments

[chapter_stork]

Oh, Bob and Jen are a neat addition to this story. The characterization of these two is very accurate, as well, in my experience middle aged bikers are friendly, laid back and vaguely anti-authoritarian. No so many are secretly multi-millionaires, but that comes in handy, too! I like how you are exploring Michael and Sara's relationship here; they are still just getting to know each other, but with the extreme stress of being on the run they're seeing the best and worst of each other already.

[chapter_stork]

I liked Bob and Jen too, so they will be making a reappearance later in the story.

Apologies for not replying earlier , I could have sworn I had!

Pem