Fighting back

[pemphredouk]

Title: Fighting Back
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters: Michael, Sara, Lincoln, LJ,OC, Alex, Sofia Gretchen and Whistler
Rating: Probably NC-17 after the first few chapters
Summary: Michael and Sara discover things, good and bad about themselves as they finally start fighting back. All locations mentioned in the story actually exist and can be found

Comments

[arzim]

OMG, I can't believe you stopped it there! Another fantastic chapter of course. I'm really excited to see this developing plot and I'm really enjoying the relationship that you're building. I love how well Sara can read Michael, and I love the mention of how much they still have to discuss and learn about each other. So true. Anyway, can't wait for more and really lovely job!

[pemphredouk]

I'm sorry about the cliffhanger, I wasn't being intentionally mean but after writing over 8000 words in just over two days I just had to stop! or maybe it was because I realised I don't even know how they're going to get out of this yet.... (I really must start planning my plot or should that be plotting my plan a little?)

Glad you're still hanging in there!

Pem

Catch you soon, maybe we could chat one day are you on any of the thingies?(technical term for MSN Yahoo etc)

[arzim]

I consider "plotting" a fic to be the more specific version of "planning" a fic. I dunno. Maybe it's to each his/her own? :P

I would love to chat sometime! Feel free to add me, my thingy is kellener@hotmail.com. :P

[r_fed]

The story's just getting better and better.
I wonder if Micheal will be able to get them out of the situation they're in!
Thank you for quick update and a great story:), really enjoy reading this one.

Rose

[pemphredouk]

Hi Rose and thanks for the comment!
You can see from my reply to arzim above..I don't know how they're going to get out of it either....

[anonymous]

Wow, pem is on a roll!!!! You go girl! What a cliffhanger! Now, don't let us without an update for a week. I already have a few ideas in my head, and I'm trying desperately to make them silent *lol*

They should hire you as a writer for the show. You're the only one who manages to make PB interesting anymore (in my book, anyhow...)

Smooches,
bleuciel

[pemphredouk]

Bleu you want another update? sheeesh , have you seen the state of my house, the pile of ironing, the dogs not walked....?

i will try for one later this week, but no promises.

btw new words hun?

*hugs*

Pem

[silverrosecross]

So I followed a link for this story from michaelandsara and read all 19 chapters in one sitting!
Your writing is wonderful and completely captivating, I have such a vivid picture in my head of all thats happened its almost like watching the show.
Clearly this is how season 4 should play out!
Looking forward to the next chapter
-Carla

[pemphredouk]

Thank you Carla for such a wonderful comment.

I'm impressed you read all 19 chapters in one sitting, that takes some doing as its nearly 89000 words!

I must admit I have very strong images in my head of the chapter when I sit down to write it, even down to the expressions on their faces, the way the scene would look on a screen etc... so thank you for saying it helped you to create your own images.

I have no idea if S4 will be anything like this, I hope they give us as many MISA moments as I have tried to, I think we've waited long enough!

Have you read any of my other fics? I'd be interested in your thoughts.

Pem

[silverrosecross]

I kept saying to myself "just one more chapter then i'll stop" but then I'd get to the end of the chapter and want to know what happened next, luckily I didn't have much else to do today!

One of the things I can see really clearly is Sara with her cast and the map that Michael drew for her (I'd love to see him draw more on the show as to have designed those tattoos he's obviously pretty good at it).

I hope there are many many MiSa scenes in the new season too and that they come up with a believable way for Sara to not be dead.

Haven't read any of your other fics yet but I'm sure I'll be having a look!

[pemphredouk]

Just had a peek at your LJ and hadn't realised you were also in the UK. So hi to a fellow Brit!

Also noticed you're friends with Roni2727,I'm going to visit her in a few weeks in LA! (stupidly excited)

If you want me to recommend a fic, and you don't mind it starting off sad then ...Five Years, its a MISA story ...eventually.

[anonymous]

ohhh, you're great!! a million thanks for this..!!