Fighting back

Jun 21, 2008 12:14

Title: Fighting Back
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters: Michael, Sara, Lincoln, LJ,OC, Alex, Sofia Gretchen and Whistler
Rating: Probably NC-17 after the first few chapters
Summary: Michael and Sara discover things, good and bad about themselves as they finally start fighting back. All locations mentioned in the story actually exist and can be found ( Read more... )

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darkwriter69 June 21 2008, 16:25:52 UTC
Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.

Thankyou for saving me.

Gah!

This chapter = love. I adored the sex scene like I can't even find words. And I so totally loved the way you wrote about Mike's loss of control.

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pemphredouk June 21 2008, 17:31:59 UTC
Aww thanks Jules, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and it means a lot when other writer's I admire happen to like my stuff.

Pem

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r_fed June 21 2008, 16:43:59 UTC
Love it!

I forgot to breath through the first half of this chapter LOL, you came up with such a great scene, and luck was on their side indeed!

Oh, and thanks for adding me:)

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pemphredouk June 21 2008, 17:33:52 UTC
Well this last chapter will teach me not to write my characters into situations I have no idea how to get them out of! I spent all week working out what to do. Glad it convinced you tho!

Oh and my apologies I meant to ask you first before adding you as a friend hope you don't mind!

Pem

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r_fed June 22 2008, 01:38:07 UTC
You did great with this chapter!, as a reader, I enjoy reading throughout the whole chapter.

No need to apologize, glad you added me:)

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