Fighting back

[pemphredouk]

Title: Fighting Back
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters: Michael, Sara, Lincoln, LJ,OC, Alex, Sofia Gretchen and Whistler
Rating:NC-17 after the first few chapters
Summary: Michael and Sara discover things, good and bad about themselves as they finally start fighting back. All locations mentioned in the story actually exist and can be found on the

Comments

[eight8toes]

He wrote eloquently about sunsets and sunrises and how his dearest wish was always to share them with her

You made me bite my lower lip there, but it was a lost case. Two seconds later, I was crying, lol.

I've stopped asking myself how many wrongs make a right

Excellent point to bring up, dear. And you answered it well, in my opinion, saying that it was his choice to fight back. I didn't see Michael as selfish and arrogant, though... I don't know why. But perhaps you are right.

Very well done, and I hope this is not the last we'll read from you :)

[jendill]

How beautiful!
I love how he explained everything through his writing. And my favorite part? The map hanging on the wall! You really do like maps don't you?
I'm sad to see it end, but I love how it ended... it all works out.

[anonymous]

thank you for your stories, always enjoy them. In spite of other fans I especially like the interaction between lincoln and michael, somehow being brothers gives fiction just that extra touch. Could you come up with a bit more brotherfiction?
maybe seeing them back on t.v. will give extra inspiration, thanks, Debra.

[r_fed]

Great ending!
Thank you so much for this wonderful fic, it's been a great ride and hope you continue to write more:)