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pemphredouk

The future we deserve

Oct 22, 2008 00:12

Title: The future we deserve
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters: Michael, Sara, Lincoln, OC, Alex, Sucre Bellick, Agent Self
Rating:NC-17 eventually
Summary: Scylla has been found and the Company is falling apart....Michael and the rest of the team are ready to take the freedom Self promised...but this is PB and life is never that simple.

( Chapter 2: Know thy enemy )

fics: the future we deserve

Comments 9

far1003 October 13 2008, 08:35:10 UTC

Pamela, I am loving where this is going. It is entertaining, suspenseful and downright well written. I await chapter three with eager anticipation. What has happened to Sara? I guess I will have to wait and see.

pemphredouk October 14 2008, 21:54:36 UTC

hi fleur! *waves*

Glad you;re enjoying the start fo this, i'm having major internal discussions as to where I want to go with it, angst...rebirth....redemption....revenge...

no idea yet

(I really should plan these better)

where ya been btw? missed you on MSN!

jendill October 14 2008, 01:51:42 UTC

Wonderful chapter dear, now tell me, Sara's ok right?! Cuz if not I just might freak out.

pemphredouk October 14 2008, 21:52:22 UTC

Sara...hmmmm

define ok?

;o)

jendill October 14 2008, 21:58:09 UTC

Oh that's just mean! ;)
by 'ok' I mean alive and well, none of this hiab crap lol!

pemphredouk October 14 2008, 22:10:39 UTC

If she was HIAB again she wouldn't have needed an ambulance...UPS could have delivered......

hows motherhood going btw?

wanna swap your little beauty for 3 teenagers?

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lizparker6 October 14 2008, 23:17:03 UTC

Wonderful and action packed and I have to say that you got me pretty hooked here, cant wait for more. :) hope you can keep up, cause youve set a pretty good starting standard there. As a hopeless shipper, I, of course, cant wait until mike reaches hospital. :)

I really like you style and I loved some touches of this story, example how michael was in kind of a denial and didnt fully realize what happened until after stepping onto the boat and discovering the overthrown bucket of ice and blood stains, I loved how you discribed this moment and I think it was pretty powerful, at least to me. I also think that you wrote michael pretty well, he was truly in character, in my view, that is, but you really did a great deal of work on this story, one can tell.
Now of course, I cant wait to see where you lead us from here, but I like the idea of a scattered team who has to fight against wyatt.

Aaaanyway.:) keep up the very good work, and of course,cant wait to read more.

Awesome job!

sdwolfpup October 15 2008, 00:47:21 UTC

This is really interesting; I look forward to seeing where you go with it!