The future we deserve

[pemphredouk]

Title: The future we deserve
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters: Michael, Sara, Lincoln, LJ,OC, Alex, Bellick roland Agent Self
Rating:NC-17 after the first few chapters
Summary: Scylla has been found and the Company is falling apart....Michael and the rest of the team are ready to take the freedom Self promised...but this is PB and life is never that

Comments

[lizparker6]

Very very nice!
I liked how you handled things; moving sara to a military base seemed like a good idea to have her some quiet time, yet, they are only there temporarily and outside, there is still an assassing waiting for them to crawl out for their temporary sanctuary, so michael now need a plan of what to do next. :) I am veery glad sara being away and kicking. :) Hope to see some dialogue between them in the next chapter, though i really liked how you wrote things about her awakening in this one, it really didnt need any words, the way you desribed everything made perfect sense.:)

A truly enjoyed reading this. :) Cant wait for more.

[sk56]

you move quite alot of plot along without it feeling rushed or sketchy -- the characters are still the main focus of our attention.

[far1003]

I have been so wrapped up with the characters in your story that I have not felt that it has been going too slow. I think if you tried to move it along any faster it would feel rushed....meanwhile I am quite happy to live in your little fantasy world of Michael and Sara any day!

I cannot wait to see where you go with the next chapter. How long do I have to wait (Im am trying not to be too impatient)*g*

[jendill]

Aw! Snuggles!