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Stripes and Spots

Jun 14, 2009 01:17

Title: Stripes and Spots
Fandom: Original
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: racism, girlkissing
Summary: Some things just don’t mix.
Notes: Written for the June week 2 challenge at brigits_flame, theme “oil and vinegar.” The quote at the beginning is from George of the Jungle. STOP JUDGING ME OKAY IT'S A REALLY GOOD MOVIE.

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( Dionne dumps Sarah on a Wednesday, for the stupidest reason ever. )

original fiction, brigits_flame

Comments 14

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kuhori_rei June 24 2009, 20:53:52 UTC

Hee, I was going for dorky and cute. :P Thank you!

mistvieh June 15 2009, 17:57:11 UTC

GEORGE OF THE JUNGLE QUOTE, FTW!

Do I get a prize? :-)

mistvieh June 15 2009, 17:57:53 UTC

Aw, crap... I just realized you have a header that says that already... well, shit!

kuhori_rei June 24 2009, 20:57:24 UTC

lol--I put it in for fun, and I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you for reading! :)

cedarwolfsinger June 16 2009, 00:33:51 UTC

Nicely done. Clever starting with the George of the Jungle quote (I love the movie, it is actually a good movie when you get past the cartoonishness), then the stripes and spots and her outfit. Clever and well done!

kuhori_rei June 24 2009, 21:02:45 UTC

I wanted to tie it all in together. When I saw the prompt I definitely wanted to go with something a little different, and I thought this quote was perfect! :P I actually love the movie, as I am mentally about five years old. :)

Thanks!

ephemeralbreath June 16 2009, 01:00:09 UTC

That was really cute! Stripes and polka dots! It's a partay! -is a dork-

kuhori_rei June 24 2009, 21:03:13 UTC

Thank you! I am a firm believer that if you know what you're doing, you can totally rock stripes and spots together. :P

STRIPES AND SPOTS STRIPES AND SPOTS bethhum June 16 2009, 12:05:24 UTC

omg i love love love love the not matching thing. this was so cute, and so.... well, it was a little dorky, a little silly, but all so true. parents totally get in the way for the most stupid reasons, and they really need to STOP DOING THAT!!!!!!!!! *takes deep breaths to calm down* anyway, i love this. despite the slightly silliness of it it is very true.

<3

Re: STRIPES AND SPOTS STRIPES AND SPOTS kuhori_rei June 24 2009, 21:07:02 UTC

Awwww, thanks bb girl! I meant for it to be super silly, so yay for that working out. :P

Miss you love you!
<3 <3