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One of the Boys

Feb 05, 2010 00:50

Title: One of the Boys
Fandom: Original
Rating: PG-15
Warnings: psychological musings, sexual imagery, sexual identity issues
Summary: It’s hard to belong to a group when you don’t want to belong to yourself.
Notes: Written for the February week 1 contest at brigits_flame, theme: “birds of a feather.” I had to write this much sooner than I wanted ( Read more... )

Comments 9

lacruciverbiste February 6 2010, 16:09:49 UTC

Powerful subject and nice use of the prompt. I hope I get to edit this this week! I have some ideas to make it even more effective.

If not, and you still want more feedback, I'd be happy to send it to you.

Best of luck this week.
~Kate :)
http://lacruciverbiste.livejournal.com/7633.html

sue_bridehead February 8 2010, 02:36:55 UTC

This was a very moving story. I liked the way you presented it. Good job.

mistvieh February 8 2010, 06:03:06 UTC

I love your take on the prompt, and what you did with it. I think you really got into this narrator's head, because I believed every word.

covenmouse February 8 2010, 17:58:40 UTC

I have nothing but pure, unadulterated love for this. <3 Well done

shadowrain February 9 2010, 04:37:41 UTC

I think this might be the most original take on the prompt I've read so far. I think you did an excellent job covering a very emotional and difficult subject. There's so much passion and conviction in the narrator's voice that I felt like I was really talking to her (him.)

Lovely.