Comments | pen_strokes: all the transparence (in the shades of red)

pen_strokes

all the transparence (in the shades of red)

Jun 25, 2012 23:18

Title: all the transparence (in the shades of red)
Fandom/Pairing: The Avengers, Clint/Natasha
Rating: E
Word Count: 3939
Summary: It is not always about remaking, about reconstruction; sometimes it is just about trust.
Notes: First Avengers fic. Be gentle with me, darlings.
( After New York, Natasha gives Clint a week to clear his head. )

fanfiction, avengers, intentional fanfiction, clint/natasha

Comments 15

phdelicious June 26 2012, 15:16:52 UTC

This has a quiet, gorgeous simplicity to it that works as a great counter-part to what we see in the movie.

kuhori_rei June 27 2012, 00:38:13 UTC

Wow, thank you!

(The comment has been removed)

kuhori_rei June 27 2012, 00:39:56 UTC

I tend to crawl into characters' heads when I write, so I'm glad it worked out. I'm happy you liked it! :)

lil_1337 June 27 2012, 03:03:01 UTC

Wow! That was intense and gorgeous. It flowed like poetry and there was so much emotion that I got lost in it in a very good way.

The final lines show just how much Clint has come back to himself and is starting to heal.

dreamingwriter June 27 2012, 06:38:43 UTC

I'd just like to say holy shit, because this is one of the most visually arresting sentences I've read in a long time.

The color suits him, just like it suits her; they were born to be painted like this, vivid red like fresh-spilled blood.

Particularly, "they were born to be painted like this." It just gives me goosebumps.

Nice job!