Evolution of a Dream

[pen_strokes]

Title: Evolution of a Dream
Fandom: Original
Rating: PG
Warnings: none!
Summary: She wants to be President from the first day of kindergarten. He never really plans that far ahead.
Notes: Written for the May week 1 challenge at brigits_flame, theme “aspirations.” Here, kids, have some fluff. I’d say it’s for Mother’s Day, but there’s really nothing Mother’s Day

Comments

[mistvieh]

"She smiles, brilliant and winning, the smile that captured him years before it captured a country." Aaaaaw!

^______________^ CUTE

[kuhori_rei]

Thank you! Glad you liked.

Also, ICON LOVE.
<3

[firesign10]

That was lovely :-)

[kuhori_rei]

Aw, thanks!

[katden]

::hands clapping madly!!::
Bravo!

[kuhori_rei]

Thank you! :)

Dearest, you brought tears to my eyes

[esteebee]

This was fantastic, REALLY!! This is the sweetest fluff I've seen in a while. You really have a gift not only for capturing both of their personalities through short scene and allowing the reader to connect with both characters, but how they interact with each other. I really loved the scene when he asks her to Prom, it made me melt.
In the ice cream scene as well, you brought them to life in a way that just endeared them both to my heart. Him trying to cheer her up with ice cream is so sweet, and her irrationality is adorable. Haha, listen to me babble on. I just really love your style! ;)
I really liked how you ended with the last line, especially remembering the second scene when he made "her face light up like Christmas".
That kind of devotion is very sweet, and I also love the female Pres. motif. It made me smile when I first read it! I think I told everyone that in 1st grade too haha.

Great Job beautiful!! We will get together so very soon!! (As soon as I get done with the damn UWS paper *jumps out a window to freedom*)

Re: Dearest, you brought tears to my eyes

[kuhori_rei]

Hey lovely!!! I miss you.
<3 <3 <3

This really was very fluffy, but I actually enjoyed writing it, which is rare for me when it comes to fluffy stuff like this. :) I'm glad you liked it though!

Oh you were totally president in first grade.

See you sooooon!
<3

Editor

[attentionhoard]

Hello there. As I've read and commented upon many, many entries in the community up to this point, you know I usually have a lot to say and offer in way of suggestions and concerns. This, however, is not an entry that warrants much in the way of suggestions or concerns.

I really love this piece and it's by far my favorite of yours I've read since your participation in the contest. The story has an incredible flow to it, it's an easy read without being too easy I feel like it's elementary. You've captured something truly special with your words here and you should be very, very proud. Nice work, I can't compliment you enough on this entry.

Re: Editor

[kuhori_rei]

Hee. Why is it that I feel like every time you edit a piece, you say it's your favorite? :P I guess I just keep improving? Maybe? lol.

Thank you!

Re: Editor

[attentionhoard]

You just must keep cranking out one good piece after another!

I don't say anything I don't me :-)