Something Blue (3/3)

[pen_strokes]

Title: Something Blue (3/3)
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: graphic dub-con, spoilers through 2x09
Summary: After Gwen’s wedding, Jack is hurt, Ianto is forgiving, and things go too far.
Notes: Thank you all for your reviews! :) I’m glad this has been coming along in-character and realistic up to this point. This chapter is a bit longer, but

Comments

[phaetonschariot]

eeeeeeee fic.

Actually I sort of agree that a crazy confrontation mightn't be right. Ianto isn't a pushover, but I can see him having the idea that having such a strong obvious reaction would make him into a victim - aside from Cyberwoman his outbursts tend to be of the *tasers you in the face* sort rather than crying and yelling.

[kuhori_rei]

Those were my thoughts exactly--just because Ianto doesn't have a freakout doesn't mean he's okay, but he's not a victim, either. I don't see him tasering Jack in the face, though. :)

Thank you for reading!

[inushipo]

I really love the story I kept checking and checking back hoping for part 3.

sequel? pleaseeeeeeee!!!!

[kuhori_rei]

Thank you! I'm glad I could get it posted before you got mad at me. :P

There's a sequel being written--keep an eye out for it!

[inushipo]

you´re great writer!!! I would never get mad at you.... never... ;)

[jay_kateel]

Oh, and a completely random side-note. Thank you for the proper use (and use of) of semi-colons. =)

[kuhori_rei]

I'm a fan of semi-colons, though I do tend to overuse them sometimes. :P In this fic, though, I think I overused commas more than semi-colons. :)

[jay_kateel]

Honestly, I would love to see the overuse (and proper use!!!) of semi-colons. I am an editor, and I see the misuse of them all the time. You a) know how to use semi-colons and b) know how to use commas. Pat on back for you. =D

[estel_anim]

Brilliant ending, and yeah, even though I might have half wanted a big confrontation (between Jack, Owen and Tosh more then Jack and Ianto) I know that this was the right way to do it.

With the story as a whole I really liked the point of view changes and how the story wasn’t just about Jack and Ianto but the others as well, it added a balance that was really nice.

And I don’t even need to pause before saying yes, yes I would love a sequel!

Not just for the Jack/Ianto but because I think this added a lot to the relationship between Ianto, Owen and Tosh…I would love to see that develop too and then see how Gwen fits into it all.

Now lastly and most importantly - Thankyou for writing and post this story.

[kuhori_rei]

Thanks!

The thing with the point-of-view in this fic is that I was trying to do it differently than the usual dub-con/non-con fic. The actual event was from Ianto's point of view, but the immediate fallout and reconciliation weren't, and that's a bit different than you usually see it. :)

The sequel's going to go into the changed dynamic between the team--Owen, Tosh, and Gwen when she gets back from her honeymoon--as well as Jack and Ianto repairing their relationship. :) It definitely develops things more.

Thank you so much for reading!

[zortified]

I really enjoyed this, and I could definitely see it happening like this - Jack misunderstanding and Ianto just letting him, and all the awkward of trying to start putting it back together somehow. And yeah, a sequel would be awesome.

[kuhori_rei]

There were a lot of misunderstandings. A lot of the problems with non-con is that people are always like "GIANT VIOLENT EVENT WITH NO DIVISION OF BLAME", but with two people already in a relationship, it gets much more complicated.

Sequel is in the works. :) Thank you for reading!