Cowboy Poetry

Jun 05, 2009 18:05

Title: Cowboy Poetry
Fandom: Original
Rating: PG
Warnings: some language
Summary: We don’t get a lot of city boys out here.
Notes: Written for the June week 1 challenge atbrigits_flame brigits_flame, theme "ranch." Not the easiest of topics to work with, but I figured something out. :P Cut text and quote within the story come from “The Ranchman’s Song,” by William ( Read more... )

original fiction, brigits_flame

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katden June 8 2009, 15:54:22 UTC
Well...you've done it again genius! Really! I do love your characters. This was so lovely. The words seem simple but they give away so much emotion; so much under the surface that we don't have to see in order to feel!! I cannot wait to see what you come up with for next week.

Your admiring fan,
Kathy

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kuhori_rei June 24 2009, 20:21:17 UTC
I was definitely going for simplicity in this piece--glad it worked! :)

Thanks!

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Re: Edit! kenderlord June 14 2009, 15:07:26 UTC
Hello! I am David, and I am the back-court component of the D-squared tennis/edit team. I will echo Dani's sentiments and pick up whatever else she left for me ( ... )

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Re: Edit! kuhori_rei June 24 2009, 20:26:28 UTC
AWESOME EDITS! Thank you guys so much for so much feedback and so many great ideas. :) I really appreciate it!

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