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nomnomcookies November 27 2008, 03:37:49 UTC
Most unsettling. I've not ever been much for stories.

Did you find this story yourself?

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penbeforesword November 27 2008, 03:42:02 UTC
I wrote it.

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nomnomcookies November 27 2008, 03:43:19 UTC
Well, I'm no writer myself, but it was a very impressive tale. You have quite the knack for words and a brutal story.

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penbeforesword November 27 2008, 03:46:09 UTC
I appreciate the thought. I only wish I knew the value of this particular story.

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cafedeinfierno November 27 2008, 03:41:58 UTC
It captures the folly of mankind, all right. And quite the ending you've got there.

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penbeforesword November 27 2008, 03:43:33 UTC
Thank you, I guess. I think I'd rather have written a different ending.

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cafedeinfierno November 27 2008, 03:44:54 UTC
They seem to dictate themselves, even with a skillful pen. It takes quite the twist to alter that fate.

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penbeforesword November 27 2008, 03:46:44 UTC
...Do you write?

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onceuponaduck November 27 2008, 04:08:25 UTC
Fakir...

That was... ah... not very happy, was it?

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penbeforesword November 27 2008, 04:16:22 UTC
Not very. But it's just a story. I hope.

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axinfinity November 27 2008, 04:24:13 UTC
Unsettling is right. However, I understand that not all stories have pleasant endings. The woman rather deserved it, after all.

I was finished with some of these recent audio books, so I needed another read. Do you have any more stories?

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penbeforesword November 27 2008, 04:25:44 UTC
I suppose that's one way of looking at it.

Nothing else here until I write them, I'm afraid. But there's little else to do here, so I'll probably produce something new soon.

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axinfinity November 27 2008, 04:40:36 UTC
There're plenty of ways of looking at stories from different angles. Fairy tales, I've noticed, have that sort of knack.

So you write them? Seems I'll be reading more of your work, then.

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penbeforesword November 27 2008, 21:11:11 UTC
Then I'll keep writing.

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dontcallmeangus November 27 2008, 04:51:32 UTC
Got a good hand for writin', I see. Good story...sad story, but good. Took a lot from it.

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penbeforesword November 27 2008, 21:11:26 UTC
Thank you.

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