His Last Love Letter.

Apr 05, 2009 00:05

Ash looked at the envelope - he weighed it up and shifted it from one hand to the other as though in doing so its contents would be magically revealed to him. Tucking it in his back pocket he brewed a pot of coffee and moved out to the balcony. It had become his domain whenever he wanted a bit of peace and quiet - which happened a lot lately. He ( Read more... )

hustle, ash, june

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handy_melon April 5 2009, 00:36:00 UTC
God, I love those last three sentences.

This is just beautiful.

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handy_melon April 5 2009, 00:36:43 UTC
... and I put the wrog icon on that post. Doh!

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pinkwafer2 April 5 2009, 21:26:33 UTC
That was brilliant and really believable. Poor Ash.

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genegenie92 April 5 2009, 21:28:44 UTC
This is brilliant, very touching and the line "Little do they know, my love, that you have been my life support." Really does tug on the ol' heart strings. :'(

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hustlejo April 6 2009, 07:24:32 UTC
Typing this through bleary wet eyes. Lovely Penfold. 'I've made you cry so often' gets me all the time.

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penfold2 April 6 2009, 08:07:22 UTC
Thank you all for your lovely comments !

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