Comments | penfold2: Dotting the 'I's and Crossing the 'T's.

penfold2

May 16, 2009 21:17

Title : Dotting the 'I's and Crossing the 'T's ( Read more... )

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hustlejo May 16 2009, 23:37:02 UTC

Great chapter Penfold, Jake isn't so cocky now! Description of the B&B was great.

Really look forward to the next chapter

penfold2 May 17 2009, 08:18:26 UTC

Thank you so much! Chapter 5/6 out later today hopefully.

pinkwafer2 May 17 2009, 11:21:15 UTC

That was excellent. Almost felt sorry for Jake, but not quite! Looking forward to the rest.

matthes3 May 17 2009, 12:19:01 UTC

Brilliant Penfold, loved it, can't wait for the next chapter!!