Old poem

[penguam]

this is from before school ended (remember that whole mercedes mess combined with a low point in substance abuse) just to see if i get a response before i put up more recent ones... so some of you may hav already seen it but still comment, good or bad

Comments

[rockmysocks212]

Hey Adam its Katie Dvorak. I like writing poetry too so i thought I would comment. I like this poem a lot,you should def. post more.

[anonymous]

i like it.

"But she walks in just before flesh is raked" --- not that you care, but that's my favorite line.

"Then with a smile and a wink
She turned around and ran" --- like that too.

it'd be cool to see some of your more recent stuff.

miss ya, roxanne.

[ext_363]

yo its tanya.

i like this poem.

[anonymous]

wow....thats really good

Fabulous

[anonymous]

I likes.... a lot.
Not that I expect any less from you. You make me feel like a shitty poet.
You're good at displaying your feelings through visual images without just coming out and saying it. I love it!!!

-Jess