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penguinator27

CRITIQUE ME! Please?

Nov 17, 2005 01:25

NOTE: I wrote this late at night. In fact, I just finished it. It's a short paper for a class, and I want to know if it's any good. There aren't any italics or anything on this version because I didn't bother to put them in. HTML takes too long. I want to call it 'Kung Fu Bunnies.' Well, maybe not. I'll think of something. I'd really appreciate ( Read more... )

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reddragon15 November 17 2005, 19:43:43 UTC

Pretty good Angela. Purddy Good. at least I approve of it.

thegabe_1984 November 17 2005, 23:40:42 UTC

ANGELA IS SPREADING PROPAGANDA!!!! next thing you know women will be wanting to vote! BLASPHEMY!!!

...na, just kidding. I thought it was great

penguinator27 November 20 2005, 19:51:39 UTC

Of course I'm sending propaganda; it's all in the name of my crimson insurrection.

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reddragon15 November 18 2005, 03:12:46 UTC

I agree with Kirk....

penguinator27 November 20 2005, 19:54:14 UTC

Yes, of course. I know some need the veritable soft- core porn of Hollylwood. Just kidding, Kirky.